1-Day Intensive: When to Show, When to Tell Zoom Seminar, Tuesday, March 28th, 2023
Tuesday, March 28th, 2023
Class will meet on 3/28 via Zoom, 7:00 PM - 9:00 PM EST
Open to All writers!
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Taught by Blaise Allysen Kearsley, a Black-biracial writer and teacher based in Brooklyn. Her writing has appeared in Catapult, Longreads, the Boston Globe, Electric Literature's The Nervous Breakdown, Elle, Midnight Breakfast, The Weeklings, and in the anthologies Mortified: Real Words. Real People. Real Pathetic, Nonwhite and Woman, and Cringe: Teenage Diaries, Journals, Notes, Letters, Poems, And Abandoned Rock Operas. Blaise is a contributing editor at Vestal Review, the oldest flash fiction journal on the planet.
You've heard the age-old axiom, "show, don't tell." Less a mantra than a pointed maxim, "show, don't tell" is an important writer's reminder that works for crucial moments in a story.
But what about balancing showing and telling? How do we know when to do what? At any given moment in our storytelling, will a scene best serve our story? A lengthy description?
When do we drop info and backstory and move along, keeping pace and ensuring the reader sticks with us?
This intensive seminar will explore these questions and more.
- Understand the difference between "showing" and "telling" in creative writing.
- Learn techniques for balancing showing and telling in a story.
- Learn how to effectively use "showing" and "telling" to improve pacing.
- Discover new techniques for incorporating background information without slowing down the story.
- Understand how to use "showing" and "telling" to enhance the reader's experience.
- Build skills in recognizing when to use "showing" or "telling" in different scenes and moments in a story.
- Enhance your ability to write effective, engaging and immersive stories.
"I love the readings we do, and especially that they so often feature writers of color. The written feedback from you is always so helpful and in-depth. The prompts helped me to develop a lot of content. I always look forward to workshop nights -- it's a safe space to share."
"I felt so often in college that I was writing against these very confident men who were forthcoming about the problems within my work and style. Working in your group has been restorative and has allowed me to trust myself without fear of being torn apart."
"Working with Blaise has made me a more confident writer. She's helped me to see my writing as a larger work, and creates a safe, inclusive, encouraging space to share and connect with other writers."
"Blaise is such a skilled reader and editor, and her notes are always valuable. She offers wonderful perspectives, and assembles groups of writers with keen perspectives of their own."
"I really loved the class. You treat every question with such a genuine desire to give the best possible answer and it made me happy every time. I admire that you focus on building people up. For someone like me, that means the world."
"During quarantine I had to show up for myself and others who counted on me, even when I felt like all I wanted to do was hide under my couch. Being part of this creative group of writers saved me."
ONLINE COURSE STRUCTURE:
This class meets via Zoom. Come prepared for an engaging class with live interaction on Zoom!
Instructor: Blaise Allysen Kearsley
Tuesday, March 28th, 2023
Course is fully ONLINE.
Instructor Blaise Allysen Kearsley is a Black-biracial writer and teacher based in Brooklyn. She comes from a long line of teachers, builders, visual artists, and writers. Her writing has appeared in Longreads, the Boston Globe, Electric Literature's The Nervous Breakdown, Elle, Midnight Breakfast, The Weeklings, and in the anthologies Mortified: Real Words. Real People. Real Pathetic. (Simon Spotlight Entertainment) and Cringe: Teenage Diaries, Journals, Notes, Letters, Poems, And Abandoned Rock Operas (Crown Archetype). She has essays forthcoming in Catapult and the anthology Nonwhite and Woman in February 2022. She is the creator/producer/host of the How I Learned storytelling series and has performed at The Moth, Literary Death Match, Risk, and The Liar Show. Blaise is a contributing editor at Vestal Review, the oldest flash fiction journal on the planet. Learn more about Blaise here.